Ryder On The Storm by Violet Paterson, Edited by Trace Broyles
Overall *** Plot *** Interactions *** Characters *** World **** Originality **** Grammar **** Style ****
This review is based upon a review copy given to me by the author.
Storm Sullivan comes from a long line of Seers, but she doesn't care. In fact, for most of her life, she hasn't cared about much of anything. When she learns of her Aunt Trin's death, no tears come. Her two best friends Dan and Shane are gorgeous men who both love her, but she feels no attraction to them. In fact, she's never really felt any attraction for any man. Until she meets Ryder, an immortal who has been tasked to destroy the Sullivan seer's to avert the fulfillment of an old prophecy.
When Storm meets Ryder, the sheer intensity of the physical attraction between the two overwhelms them, leaving both of them shocked and confused.
After Storm encounters Ryder, her life changes. Suddenly she can feel again and just as suddenly, powers that she has never experienced before begin to manifest. At the same time, ancient prophecies by her ancestor's come to the fore and she finds herself in the middle of a battleground between her kind and the immortals.
The writing in Ryder On The Storm is generally solid and clean. It is told from the points of view of the two main characters, Ryder and Storm (thus the title). It fulfills its role as a paranormal romance and should satisfy lover's of that genre.
In Ryder, Violet Patterson has a deft hand at description, but some of her dialog seems a bit forced or out of place. The book starts up and grabs the readers attention quickly, and I found myself enjoying the story. It carried my interested even though the characters felt a little two dimensional. It wasn't enough to seriously interfere with my enjoyment of the book or the characters, but with one exception, there were few surprises lurking inside the characters.
The story-line is engaging and satisfying through the majority of the book. I found myself drawn into Storm and Ryder's world and found it easy to root for both protagonists and their budding romance. Unfortunately for me, I found the ending a bit flat. The climax and conclusion of the story was a bit forced and held very little tension. When it was over I found myself wondering if the author had just gotten tired of the story.
Despite the uninspiring conclusion, overall, this is a fun quick read and not a bad start to a new series. Typically, as a series continues, the author's skills improve markedly and I wouldn't be surprised to see that here.